What inspired you,
I asked him,
to make a bottle
nine feet high?
He sighed and
scratched his head,
shifted from foot to foot.
shifted from foot to foot.
I could tell he hadn't much
talked about his art (or anything).
Well, he said, I reckon I learned a
talked about his art (or anything).
Well, he said, I reckon I learned a
long time ago: people don't much want to
talk about how I feel, and why. Figured I'd need
a mighty big bottle to bottle up all my feelings,
so I set about making me one. Fascinating,
I remarked. How's that working out for you?
Just great! he said. I've sold a ton of bottles.
I just keep filling em up and shipping em out.
And it does bring me some manner of
satisfaction to know, he said with a grin:
people are paying big bucks for what
I would've shared gladly
with all of them, free-of-charge.
I remarked. How's that working out for you?
Just great! he said. I've sold a ton of bottles.
I just keep filling em up and shipping em out.
And it does bring me some manner of
satisfaction to know, he said with a grin:
people are paying big bucks for what
I would've shared gladly
with all of them, free-of-charge.
**writing in community with Poetry Jam
What a wonderful write Brandee...I love it!! So many of us do bottle up our feelings, but how you portrayed it here is perfect....nailed it for the prompt! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Friend. Good to see you in these here parts.
Deleteha. how interesting those last couple lines....and i think that in freely giving
ReplyDeletewe might find a bit more freedom...
Yes, but isn't it interesting that sometimes people appreciate only the things for which they pay dearly?
DeleteThis is pretty cool. I love the whole theme of this. And the twist at the end is priceless, no matter how much a nine-foot tall bottle would cost!
ReplyDeletePeace <3
Jay
Thanks, Jay. So glad we've connected in the blogosphere.
DeleteThis really makes you feel gratitude and hope, a gift freely given is so precious.
ReplyDeleteWonderful write and I love that you shaped it like a bottle! The last lines were especially good.
ReplyDeleteVery clever, Brandee .. I love this.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful, insightful write with a bit of wink at our all-too-human foibles.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THIS!!!!! PLEASE QUIT "PUBLISHING" YOUR CONTEST ENTRIES BEFORE THEY WIN YOU SOME BIG BUCKS! BRILLIANT MY FRIEND BRILLIANT
ReplyDeleteVery cool. Very interesting. Love your new profile pic too :)
ReplyDeleteVery nose...I love the shape
ReplyDeleteGreat write and I love the shape of the poem too.
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